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The Poem

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The Poem

Stars blaze the night 
While a pen of tears 
Smears words across, 
A white sheet of fears 
  
Letting out your soul 
To breathe a verse 
Something you seek 
No need to rehearse 
  
A powerful statement 
The thoughts from within 
A time taking pain 
Once you finally begin 
  
A constant word play 
Descriptive and woven 
The purest of feelings 
Are the ones you’ve chosen 
  
To write and recite 
Put down in words 
Because balls of paper 
Will never be heard.

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:45:00 PM
    Hey Phill! Great to see you here! An excellent poem...I remember it. As far as reviews...you review people and they will review you. And of course...placing in contest gets you reviews. Checking reviews and seeing how many people have viewed your poem is so much easier here. And the contests are much fun!

    souza Avatar philip souza
    Date: 6/12/2012 12:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank so much Caleb,your a solid Dude,I appreciate everything !
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 11:09:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup Phillip - you written well, like it - love from Norway and me Anne-Lise

    souza Avatar philip souza
    Date: 6/11/2012 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Anne-lisa,and much love from the U.S.!
  1. Date: 6/10/2012 10:54:00 PM
    wow impressive,you will learn along the way welcome to the SOUP Philip

    souza Avatar philip souza
    Date: 6/11/2012 2:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank a lot Richard,I appreciate your review and thanks for welcoming me !
    souza Avatar philip souza
    Date: 6/11/2012 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Richard ,I appreciate the comment,and thanks for welcoming me !
  1. Date: 6/10/2012 9:51:00 PM
    Hi my name is Phil this is my first poem on here don't know if I put it in the right spot,if any one can let me know,how I get it reviewed? thank you