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Two Elephants

Two Elephants

There once were two very large elephants
Who, night and day, ate only jelly-ants
'Till one day one said
To the other one, "Fred,
I do believe you have on smelly pants!!"

deborah burch©
6/10/2012

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    ... Gigno
    Date: 2/10/2013 6:20:00 PM
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    !!!
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    David Williams
    Date: 6/13/2012 7:30:00 AM
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    Cap'n Deb congrats on your win..very funny ...David
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 6/12/2012 8:32:00 PM
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    Cute, Deborah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 6/12/2012 7:23:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "#2 Another Crazy & Fun Limerick" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 6/12/2012 2:28:00 AM
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    Big Congrats Debs so funny love it xx soup
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 6/11/2012 10:29:00 PM
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    You're too funny, Deborah! Congratulations on your win in PD's Contest! Ruben.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 6/11/2012 9:44:00 PM
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    hahaha, this is a funny one to picture. Congrats on your win.
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    RALPH TAYLOR
    Date: 6/11/2012 6:46:00 PM
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    Congrats, Deb. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. hugs., Ralph
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 6/11/2012 1:58:00 PM
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    Debbie....u BIG kid, U! Funny limerick! :) Congrats.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 6/11/2012 12:41:00 PM
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    DEB, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK,,, XOX~PD
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 6/10/2012 1:21:00 PM
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    yayyyyy, laughing non-stop, deborah.. cool piece with winning hugggs!
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 6/10/2012 1:01:00 PM
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    Ha Ha!! I just love this very clever write my friend! You are a genius! What a fabulous and excellent poem Debbie! Great Work!!
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    Josie Whitehead
    Date: 6/10/2012 12:08:00 PM
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    HA HA - EXCELLENT - 10/10 Debs. What fun!!! I'm so glad you found a use for elephants and smelly pants, ha ha. I'll be laughing all evening.
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    David Williams
    Date: 6/10/2012 12:00:00 PM
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    Cap'n Deb, ha haaaaaaa, you really are a nut, but love ya...David
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    John Wulf
    Date: 6/10/2012 11:49:00 AM
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    like!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 6/10/2012 10:24:00 AM
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    Sweet and funny Deborah ! - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/10/2012 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you deat Anne Lise :) i was visiting josie and this is what came of it... love ya,deb


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