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In the New World

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In the New World

In the new world, they'd been searching for signs of intelligent life when a huge jar slammed down on them! Trapped like insects, they saw peering down at them. . . giants wearing faces much like their own. Written by Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2012 For nette onclaude's IMAGINATION Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 9:36:00 AM

    A reflection of what we are, this is so good.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:26:00 AM

    Amazing! Wonderful diminishing meter perfectly executed. You have IMAGINATION in spades! Well done Andrea!! :)

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 7:11:00 AM

    What a wonderful imagination? Congrats for your well deserving win and thanks for your comments. Love and best wishes...Ravindra.. Andrea Dietrich

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 5:30:00 AM

    I coudnt "imagine" anything looking at the picture...but you.... what a fervent imagination!! : ) I love the idea! Belated congrats, Andrea. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 3:37:00 PM

    CCCCCongrats on your winning work...Sara

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 2:18:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 12:55:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 10:44:00 AM

    That's scary.hopefully these giants don't experiment on us :0 ~always&forever

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 4:39:00 AM

    Liked it first time, well done and congratulations xx

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 3:46:00 AM

    Hey Andrea Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 9:14:00 PM

    BOO~ BEAM ME UP ANDREA~ , congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 8:27:00 PM

    Congratulation, very nice imaginary poem, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs! Erich

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 6:03:00 PM

    Congrats here Andrea. I was thinking giant jar also...haha. I really wanted to enter this one but time slipped away from me. I'm afraid from late summer to early winter I won't be able to enter many at all. I'll be too busy with work...boooooooo! But I'll do as many as I can.

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 5:10:00 PM

    congrats on your win andrea with an 'out of this world' nonet, half humorous, half nightmarish...

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 1:19:00 PM

    great one for this contest, my friend - love the way you used the jar

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 11:31:00 AM

    Nice imagination, best wishes from bl. loved always

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 3:19:00 PM

    very nice andrea ,you are very talented

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 2:53:00 AM

    Good Nonet. I think that this is a really great poem. This is a very good poem and I hope that you write more like it.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:57:00 PM

    I look for intelligent life too and basically find it here on Soup! Perhaps governments should visit us Andrea, don't know if I'd like their faces peering down at me though! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 2:53:00 PM

    Rip off the masks and let's see. Oh no! That's not right, on noooo what's the story. Well there's you and there's me. Supertramp. Love that song. Hope they let you out soon. Then have a nice day. :)

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Very active imagination that you have..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Sure to first one to the new imaginative planet..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 11:59:00 AM

    Looks like one giant nightmare Andrea; well wishes for contest..)

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Andrea, this one made me smile, awesome visuals.. hope you are having a fab weekend and good luck with Nette's contest :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 11:13:00 AM

    Liked you Nonet Andrea. Yes, being trapped by someone who looked like you would be confusion. A mini me in the making. ha ha. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 10:52:00 AM

    i wouldn't want to be them...yikes! very cool visual! love it!

    Sivey Avatar Russell Sivey Date: 6/10/2012 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    By the way, that was a creation of my imagination on the poem Orchid! I hope you enjoyed the write anyway even if it wasn't a true story!
  1. Date: 6/10/2012 10:46:00 AM

    This is an awesome nonet Andrea! I really enjoyed the ingenuity you have done, you're a genius! My creativity only took me so far, but yours went up to the sky and beyond! Superb Work!!

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:09:00 AM

    Good one like this what a great imagination xx

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 3:57:00 AM

    Oh Superb! Andrea, you've awesome imagination. This will undoubtedly be way up the top.

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/10/2012 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks, yesha, but I don't think so. I realized too late that she wanted "emotion" in our writing, but I could barely set up the story line with this nonet form. I would need another full nonet to add in their feelings of terror!
  1. Date: 6/10/2012 3:44:00 AM

    hi andrea thanks for your kind comments, and true this guy is not worth my energies anymore, well I am 47, and this guy isa mature guy also which is why it came as a shock to his behaviour pattens, nice one minute then acting like u have havea disiease or something the next, I wills tick with god and forget this guy now he has had a chance so is his Loss,

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 2:11:00 AM

    wow,a work of ART!!!

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