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''Doubtful Me''

~An odd sigh...
~Face to face silence....
~Heed these warning stares....
~Heart taken in dire straits.....
~Across the table, sits the sinking soul mates........

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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 12:42:00 PM

    save him mate,don't let the ship sink.nice write Kacey

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:58:00 PM

    Wow...talk about a shift in relationships...You described a strong scene here..If personal, please don't stress over the small stuff...You are too young yet! (Experience talkin')...Best to u and have a killerific weekend, Kacie! gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 12:33:00 PM

    Interesting work..Sad that the soul mates become silent and sinking..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 7:36:00 PM

    were living in the moment.