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If you are not close to me

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If you are not close to me

If you are not close to me...... Can I start my day without you my love Your absence in my house dries me out I have become my own shadow in my house and its makes me to draw in a ocean of sadness Day after days and night after nights my thirst of love brings me nothing but tears I silently think you from a distance and I feel your love throws at me with helpless If the ocean were not in love then the waves will have no strength If the sun were not in love then the lights will have no brightness If the moon were not in love then the nights will have no romance If the wind were not in love then the music will have no voice So, my love if you were not close to me my life will be in dreary. Ravi Sathasivam /Sri Lanka Copyright @ 2006 Ravi Sathasivam

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  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:45:00 PM
    Such a wonderful romantic poem, and I love how you included the analogies to the moon, the sun, and the ocean, etc.

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 6:40:00 AM
    I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Ravi. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol

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    Date: 6/26/2012 10:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comment Carol. Appreciate very much. I do understand your problems. But your thoughts are on me more than enough. God bless.
  1. Date: 6/9/2012 4:56:00 AM
    Thanks for your lovely comment Anne Appreciated. Ravi

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 4:32:00 AM
    Ohhh...so sweet and beautiful written Ravi, love it......romantic you are. - Thank you for visit and comments mine poem. - Have a romantic weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise