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Stay

Stay.
In agony 
Strands of you
In glass eye,
In wistful trance,
Endless grace
In heart etch
A secret shelf
Within death
You took
This broken self
Black eyed susan
In devestation,
Within a kiss

Breath remiss
God,
Take these tears
Take these fears
Take all of my
Years
Just give back
This Star too soon
Not yet chilled,
Diamond so bright
Within Moonlight,
We die so soon,
Stay.

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  1. Date: 6/9/2012 5:15:00 PM

    Your first and last word... effective. Your phrasing and imagery are quite remarkable. Keith

    Windisch Mason Avatar Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 6/14/2012 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Keith, Thank you so much,Wishing you happiness & all the best,Tracy.
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 1:20:00 PM

    welcome Tracy,STAY,lol,great write

    Windisch Mason Avatar Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 6/14/2012 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Richard, What an adorable picture!Your little one is beautiful!.Best wishes to you and your family,Tracy.
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Like this one to....lovely poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Windisch Mason Avatar Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 6/14/2012 5:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Anne-Lise, Thank you for your kind reply,Wishing you sunshine.Hugs,Tracy.
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 12:17:00 PM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tracy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    Windisch Mason Avatar Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 6/14/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Carol, Thank you again,for your touching words,Dear Carol,you are loveliness.Hugs,Tracy.