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  1. Date: 8/23/2012 7:33:00 PM
    me me me...Okay..I'm kidding..I could not help it.. your poem is lovely... xox~pd

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 9:29:00 AM
    very nostalgic piece David....I will wait ....:) You are a brilliant poet....

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 8:16:00 PM
    wakka wakka wakka! Nice example for your contest. :) So intensely romantic. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:01:00 PM
    This is beautiful - soupmail

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:22:00 PM
    I like this version, it fits the form better and gives more lines to work with. These always end too fast, but your is nicely done. The mind hangs onto the last few lines, and yours are great lines to hold.

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 5:32:00 AM
    You did it well David, many unknow forms for me.... - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 2:02:00 AM
    Excellent David!! I have to admit that I have never heard of this before. You have really done well. Thanks for the comment on my limerick.

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 7:47:00 PM
    hey David. did you finally find out from the direct source. It makes so much more sense this way. WELL done on your poem too. Are you going to do a contest on it?

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 5:22:00 PM
    I enjoy writing using Diminishing Hexaverse..Great topic chosen about which to write..Sara

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 2:24:00 PM
    i like this form, david , an you passed the test with high marks!..: huggs!

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 12:51:00 PM
    So good, David. I read your blog and I agree...hexaverse should be six stanzas.

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 10:16:00 AM
    You are truely skilled David in the art of form and words.......Really love this - going on my favs list. Hugs

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:08:00 AM
    This is beautiful, David. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:00:00 AM
    Wow, I love your's utterly awesome! This is such a completely fascinating poem my friend! I really enjoyed the tenderness of the write, it was very delightful! You've done excellent work! Great Work!!