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Privacy Fence Blues

On the lawn there sat an old man,
to lounge and work on his tan.
Some found it quite rude,
when he sunned in the nude,
and of my neighbor, I'm not a fan...

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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 11:03:00 AM

    Bahaha I somehow missed this one. You crack me up, Caleb. Was this the neighbour who got choked to death by Frankenstein? (Kidding.. I know you said you have don't have any neighbours haha).

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 1:34:00 AM

    LOL Love it

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 1:54:00 PM

    LOL....TREMENDOUS LIMERICK BRO...LOL

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 8:17:00 PM

    rib-tickler, caleb; cool and entertaining:) winning huggs!

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 6:50:00 PM

    You are TOO kind to me! [After years of writting verse one WILL just get bored with rhyme ;) has to happen when the number of verses you write crests 1000] You do need some help here on limerick meter..there are only 2 acceptable meters used in a limerick..if you don't use them..it isn't a limerick [it can still be a great poem!!] so lets limerickize what you have..I'll try?

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/11/2012 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    There was an old man who sat/ on the lawn without a hat/ some found him quite rude/ for he sunned quite nude/ his neighbors thought he was too fat!
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:44:00 PM

    Caleb, did you put this in one of the other contests. I really like this one!!

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 5:24:00 PM

    Got a chuckle..If for one of the couples, reads like a winner..Sara

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 12:34:00 PM

    Good Limerick and funny to....love it! - Have a lovely weekend Caleb. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 12:22:00 PM

    He sat there just like an old prune Tanning his tush until noon Sexy girl walked by I just heard a sigh Yes, he was too old to swoon LOL Vie. I could not resist to dance with you. Thanks!

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 10:27:00 AM

    A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Caleb. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Caro

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 6:53:00 AM

    Nice and funny Caleb still laughing xx

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:12:00 PM

    gosh, CAleb. you can write a good limerick. Now that I have seen all the limericks in my contest, I can start looking at people's limericks. None of your titles looked like ones in my contest. I wish you had entered my contest!

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 8:50:00 PM

    Hi Caleb, lol,,, i've never had a neighbor like this... you know what i think Caleb, if it was a female you would not complain...lol... hugs..pd