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Restless

Hot day, all day today,
No breeze to ease.

Hard to sleep tonight,
Hard to beat sticky heat.

Took a cool shower,
Resting in the midnight hour.

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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 3:04:00 PM

    A good and cooling shower in the hot summer - Well done haiku, Dave. :) Have a great new week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 9:00:00 AM

    The feeling of restlessness can be quite annoying! Reading this poem surely depicts the situation well. Cool!

    Timperley Avatar Dave Timperley Date: 7/7/2012 12:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by Bhavna, there is a cool breeze passing by our house at the moment, most refreshing. We live at about 800m overlooking Paphos and any breeze is welcome in the hot summers. God bless. Dave.
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 6:41:00 AM

    A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Dave. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol