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Captain Vanisher

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Captain Vanisher

You take away what isn't yours
Treat all your lovers like your whores
Gain the trust of the innocent
Violate them til you're spent

That holy gift so very pure
A gift you simply took as yours
Leave them broken with no cure
Captain Vanisher

In five minutes you were done
A gift she could only give to one
It meant everything to her
But you didn't care, I'm sure

I only wish that you could know
Rendering all you see unwhole
To injure you like you did her
Captain Vanisher

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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 6:56:00 PM
    hit and run tell her to be careful of Mr Vanisher,nice write Adam