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About This Poem

Alien Abduction

The door slid open the sweat poured down
Gasping for breath we did not drown
Time was up we were abused
No human hand, I mused
A laser of light
What a fright
Space men  
Ten.
©  ~GG~ 7/06/2012
Entry for:  Imagination Contest by nette
Mandy Tams ~Golden Girl~

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  1. horsman Avatar
    harry horsman
    Date: 11/8/2012 7:27:00 AM
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    your immagination is prevalent here (or is it?) see this was a winner also, and deserved.....

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/8/2012 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I was really abducted, lol... not really, then again who knows? xx
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    anne p. murray
    Date: 7/27/2012 9:01:00 AM
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    Very original as all your delightful poems are. You are very creative Blessings...Anne
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    FABIYAS M V
    Date: 6/15/2012 7:54:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win,Mandy!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 6/14/2012 3:36:00 PM
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    CCCCongrats on your win...Great work that is in the winners' list..Sara
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    Charlotte Puddifoot
    Date: 6/14/2012 3:33:00 PM
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    congrats on your contest win with this eerie alien abduction, I like how you introduced rhyme into your nonet...yes I can imagine how hillsborough brought back those sad memories for you, I too know the pain of that loss and have written a number of poems on the subject...
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 6/14/2012 12:56:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 6/14/2012 3:47:00 AM
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    Ten space men! great. Congratulations, Mandy.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 6/13/2012 9:14:00 PM
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    MANDY, congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 6/8/2012 7:39:00 PM
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    Gosh, I have no clue how to do this contest. I think you are not the first one to see them as aliens! Great imagination in this one, Mandy.
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 6/8/2012 12:56:00 PM
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    Nice, you even added rhyming to this one! Looks like something Nette will like.
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    frank herrera
    Date: 6/8/2012 8:28:00 AM
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    You have a great imagination!! I couldn't make out anything of that image. Very good use of the Form Should be a winner FOR SURE!!
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    Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/8/2012 6:30:00 AM
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    nice write,wish you the best in the contest,go get them GG,LOL
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 6/7/2012 9:32:00 PM
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    Hi Mandy, this sounds like the story i use to tell my mom, when i was little... lol~~~ a deep imagination one can have..good luck in the contest..pd
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 6/7/2012 6:40:00 PM
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    Interesting poem... well written... good luck! Terry
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    diane christian
    Date: 6/7/2012 3:34:00 PM
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    thasnks for your kind comments on my poetry, aww I used to like alien films lol God bless from diane
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 6/7/2012 1:54:00 PM
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    Great imagination that you have...Enjoyed reading this top of the winners' cirlce for sure work..Thanks for stopping by..Thanks for letting me know that I left out a word..Sara
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    David Williams
    Date: 6/7/2012 11:06:00 AM
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    Mandy, great nonet, quick close the door...David
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    jack horne
    Date: 6/7/2012 10:53:00 AM
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    Wow, I love this imaginative one, Mandy. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )


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