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The Rythem of You

I slip between the sheets 
gently not wishing to wake you.

Carefully I snuggle up beside you
nuzzeling into your neck 
where it is tender and warm.

I breathe in the aroma  
of your freshly bathed body
and the essence of you.

My hand traces your graceful 
yet sinuous body.

As I lay my head on your chest
I hear the steadiness of your
breathing and the constant
beating of your heart as you sleep.

With all of my senses now full of you
I am lulled to sleep with the rythem of you.

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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Sensual poetry that speaks to the sensitive heart, enjoyed xxx

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 1/13/2013 2:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and hope you will find others in my body of work that you enjoy. Happy New year and may it be a blessing for you. TLee
  1. Date: 9/14/2012 9:23:00 AM

    So sensuous and erotic with a touch of innocence Terry. You make touch a sensation reinvented. So special to read this! Luv, Lizabeth

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 1/13/2013 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for you kind praise. I hope your holiday season was the best and that you will have a wonderful new year. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:14:00 PM

    ‡ I Love This Beautiful Photo, Sweet Beautiful Lady * Aside From The Image Presenting These Colours Of Splendours Love * It Also The Viewer To Embrace Its Loveliness & Take Its Beauty Upon A Stroll, Deep Inside * Also, I Loved Your Lovely Comment * 'Sugar & Spice' * My Luv, Rachel ‡

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 7/24/2012 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks friend glad my words were appreciated and welcome your kind words. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/13/2012 8:39:00 PM

    OOOOOOOH yea I like this. So soothing <3

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 1/13/2013 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kindness to review and am pleased that you enjoyed my simple words. TLee
  1. Date: 6/13/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Hi Terry, I'm back again... to take another quick read... I also think the little poem you wrote as a comment to me is also splendid! If I had anything to do with the 'inspiration'... well that also makes me happy... ;-)) Terry

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 6/13/2012 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I just thought that what I wrote made a bigger story to what you wrote. I didn't even write it down to list as a poem. Yes you inspire me with some of your writings. I think more than likely that I could co-write easily with you as you are capeable of fueling my thoughts creatively. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/12/2012 2:15:00 PM

    Oh my... it's cold and rainy outside... but reading this makes me rather warm... (if you get my drift... ;-)) Very good poem!! It communicates... Terry

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 6/12/2012 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    To me this is how a relationship should be. I told you I had a tendenancy to rattle people. Thanks for your kind words. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:11:00 AM

    Very passionate write by you Terry.Love it!

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 6/8/2012 9:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kash Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 1:25:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Terry. Hope you have a beautiful evening. Love, Carol

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 6/7/2012 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Carol Thanks for stopping by and thanks for your kind words of review. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 12:01:00 PM

    A sweet poem Terry, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 6/7/2012 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne Lise so glad you liked my poem. Thanks huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:58:00 AM

    smooth very nice

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 6/7/2012 12:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard and so nice of you to stop by and review. TLee
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:50:00 AM

    Terry, thump thump,,, --- --- --- --- your poem gives a lullaby the best heart beat... enjoyed...pd

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 6/7/2012 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks DP so glad you enjoyed my poem. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 4:31:00 AM

    very nice..David

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 6/7/2012 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello friend thank you for stopping by to review and your kind words. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 1:04:00 AM

    Very beautiful feeling u get frm this poem.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 6/7/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for kind words and kindness to review. TLee