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June 6 1944

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June 6 1944

A place where peace should reign yet terror grows.
A paradise where blood and children lie.
A beach where young boys played and now men die,
With liquid crimson waves that evil sows.
The cliffs now bow and weep and look below,
Where from their shoulders cast a deadly tide.
A peaceful nighttime vista now belied
By daylight's deadly battle of the foes.

As dreams replace the din that's all around
And life drips slowly there into the sand,
It's faith and God and love that now surrounds
These ever grateful souls that have been found.
Brave comrades in this fate so proudly stand
To be delivered now where they are bound

Italian Sonnet

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  1. Date: 12/19/2013 3:51:00 PM
    wow, you did an amazing job with this earlier sonnet. I see it's Italian form. they allow for more "resolution" in the second part. Very good war poem!!

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 10:25:00 PM
    Death drips into the sand..what a description Craig...well done, congratulations

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 10:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on the fine win, Craig

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 3:56:00 PM
    Craig, . Congratulation, Thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:43:00 PM
    :-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA"

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 2:18:00 PM
    WOW... powerful and moving. I immediately thought of D Day... at any rate his is a magnificent tribute to history. Found it while browsing through Feature Poem of The Week list :)

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:05:00 AM
    CRAIG, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:16:00 PM
    This poem speaks of many ghosts and does so with conviction and sensitivity. Well done, Craig. My grandfather served in England during the war, my grandmother was a war bride and my father was born in England. Supposedly I have dual citizenship (?) because of my father being British. I hope one day to walk British soil. In regards to your poem, have you seen the film Saving Private Ryan. For those of us who did not live through those times, the movie graphically illustrates the horrors of war.

    MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan
    Date: 6/7/2012 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    PS thank you for the lovely comments and encouragement. You so make me smile... hugs, Cyndi
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 1:00:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Craig. Hope you have a beautiful evening. Love, Carol