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Refracted Reflection

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Refracted Reflection

I want to trade places,
I need a new pair of shoes;
Just for a moment ..
Can I give 'responsible ' to you?

... Flowing so nicely,
Appearing so easy ;
Let's see what happens
If its not left up to me ;

That snap of a finger,
Is a careful calculator;
Not always easy
To make it so simple;

Refracted reflection,
Mistaken vision;
So perfect a picture,
Invisible effort

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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Melani. Hope you have a beautiful evening. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 8:57:00 AM
    Good morning, Melani i loved your poem so much i cant wait till i read another one of your poems , have yourself a lovely day~ALWAYS *PD