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apoorva patrikar
Date: 8/30/2012 8:09:00 AM
wowwww! incredible! i loved it!
elizabeth wesley
Date: 7/20/2012 9:31:00 PM
So many great lines in this Nathan; just in time to put me to sleep too! A clever twist on the usual lullaby.
Joe Maverick
Date: 7/14/2012 11:59:00 PM
Enjoyed the strong caring theme in this Nathan also thanks for the comment.. I sometimes wonder about the man that is.."The man I think I could be is the better one to concentrate on for me though..) and there is better for all at the soup that way.." Forgive me for not posting at the moment but hey!! it gives me time to read more of you guys.."
Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 7/8/2012 9:02:00 AM
So tender and beautiful is your poem, Nathan. When I used to read Robert Munsch's "Love You Forever" to the kids, they'd always ask me to read it again, and on other days, again;) I cried each time...duh!:) This is as touching as that book, but more sweet. I think I'll send it to my daughter. Thanks for the comment on the Fiddler's Cat.:) Have a great week, best wishes, Mikki
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/3/2012 6:07:00 AM
what a clever and sweet lullaby poem, Nathan. Glad I finally caught this one.
Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/28/2012 3:04:00 PM
Good one with some reverse psychology to help the bab along..Karter is where he fights that nap time and he gets so ill that he doesn't even like himself until he gets some sleep...Enjoyed reading this afternoon.,Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Matt Poopenheimer
Date: 6/20/2012 11:03:00 AM
he thinks that im gay. because i said having a poetry coach is gay.
Black Eyed Susan
Date: 6/12/2012 10:03:00 AM
wow. never expected this sweet poem to come out of you, lol ;) the future awaits her... btw, like the bucket picture. so cute!
Gwendolen R.
Date: 6/11/2012 10:00:00 PM
This is grrrrreat! I love energy u created with the faster tempo and the listing of all the things this baby needs to do...my hat goes off to u for a wonderful couplet rhyme! Also, I can't remember if I thanked u for sponsoring the limerick contest...Altho' I did not place, you poured the hot sauce on with PD and SKAT and kept the fun going. Those 2 girls are a tidal wave of energy...Glad at least one other person can keep up with them...hahah. God bless, Gwendolen
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Date: 6/11/2012 12:14:00 PM
Nicely done!
Richard Palmer
Date: 6/11/2012 7:46:00 AM
cute so cute,love it
peggy caulfield
Date: 6/7/2012 8:07:00 AM
This is a darling of a poem.
S. K. A. T.
Date: 6/7/2012 7:33:00 AM
Lmfao, im calling cps. I want my pot without the leprechaun inside back. LuvSid
Cheryl Glans
Date: 6/6/2012 2:06:00 PM
How sweet!!! love it
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 6/6/2012 1:37:00 PM
It is a lovely lullaby - papa did his best,and he also need some rest. - Well done, cute poem. - oxox hug Anne-Lise