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The Death of the Poet Destroyer

Mid-morning she sees the sun ahead.
Her death flowed in a messaged bottle.
Gazing her brown eyes upon the open shores,
Her conscience dark and grey a never-ending war!
A giant cyclone of a thousand thoughts swirled around this little girl.
Inflicting away the pain, through the comfort of others pen.
The way she twisted and twisted life’s perception was out of her control.
Inside she knew the glass slipper was never hers to showoff.
 
She is baring nothing but a tainted pen, walking throughout eternity’s sand.
A prosecutor of misdeeds, accomplishing what, without knowing the way.
Departing from her fractured self, she begins to slip into a righteous form,
Twirling her twilight pen like a baton, spinning it to one final stand.
 
She awakens in a dream, where her sadness does not allow the light to reform
Her body is weak and pale against the birth of her undying sun
Staring down into the deepness of every-bodies abyss
Inside all souls is where she felt more light, than the retarded sun gives
A crimson sky follows her just to reveal her diminished soul,
A life of shunning out the city glow will always dwell deep inside her
Sleeping under society as one, insulting the taste of innocent blood
Forgetting the vengeance, in a dimension where the pen is mightier than the sword
 
How did she let it come to this?
In one feeling she fell in love with the spirit of the living rhyme 
Watching from a cave, with a diabolical look
Refusing to grasp self-nature and kill off the destroyer's will
A price beyond this enigmatic world, craving to be just like them
Condemning her meaning to a blasphemy of white butterflies
Destroying her poetic meaning that was destine to dance a tangle of endless rage
In love with the essence of her deceased will
She clings on to the dimness and brilliance at the same time
All corpses lost beyond the girl in question,
Sympathetic in a bizarre language, she mutters out sweetness
Her heart mended, recognizing all the adoration and poetic addiction
Exchanging the real terror, fixated by the life force of her poetic destruction
Giving birth to a new revelation
Now she will never deceive her love for the mocking of true art,
Not wanting to belong in this wretched world with her destroying criteria,
Her soul sails looking for a new era where love will no longer generate
As she loathes the love and decides not to destroy this generation with hate

At last, longing this one day with the angel of death
With a closing teardrop, one last thought
My death will not be the end; only the ascension~

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  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:26:00 PM

    what legends are mdade of- Finn

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 9:46:00 AM

    Girl I'm glad you didn't die. I could not go on without your evil grin lol. Interesting write this, 'Watching from a cave, with a diabolical look', lol. I think I can relate to that. Thanks for calling by, I've been busy, work has picked up, so not much time for souping, I'm not missing poems, just you lol Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 4:05:00 PM

    One word sums it up for me... awesome!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 12:57:00 AM

    awesome,,, thanks for reading "My brother Bill" I think you should stay,, I enjoy reading from you ;}

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 9:19:00 PM

    Poet, you are a Poet indeed. Thanks for bringing and sharing this wonderful master piece with me. I will read it again. I love it!!!

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:45:00 PM

    You never cease to amaze me, there are no words to describe how talented you are. I am humbled by and appreciative of your gift. You are beautiful beyond what my meer words are capable of describing.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:16:00 PM

    Love The poem very much ,check out my other ones including the List,an Angles in Heaven

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 11:26:00 AM

    The Moby Dick of imagery, Ahab and the white whale conflated into the substance of genuine art. When the poem probes the poet there is no finality like death, except the final knowing that truth has no beginning. I love the Freudian entanglements, it is indeed a very great write. Congratulations and love

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 8:51:00 PM

    great poem it made me feel strange inside! for some reason I felt like there should be more? somehow your true purpose would be revealed? warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:08:00 AM

    written when i was away, so just got here, over a thousand hits ago, oh boy harry you are slow. what can i say p.d that has not been said yet about this inspiring poem, only that i just love this.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:53:00 AM

    Did you just say death? I say it's rather a deep leap to the deep blue sea catching the depth of the ocean you dive to drive home a deep poetic insight to be cited... Thanks for your kind notes on my poems.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 3:55:00 AM

    Wow, our poetry is a little similar some great words in your poem, I have another ohe , a gut wrenching ohe which is biblical, its called Judas Iscarriot. I will post it soon on here, or could send it to you. its ohe of my best poems and I am sure would win a competition. carrington

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:38:00 PM

    death is never the end the destroyer can not be destroyed........... Great piece there..... Luv it.

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 3:01:00 PM

    No. You'll live for ever¡ Kisses.

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Great work was done here and your imagiation just flew. You will never die just pass on to another life. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Lucilla P. S. look for a soup mail.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:58:00 AM

    touching and scaring ( dont want to loose sucha good poet) b+ keep the ink flowing have a lovely day regards msuafirs

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 8:43:00 AM

    It's very sentimental but I love it especially the last part. Thanks for sharing, PD. Take care always. love leonora

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 6:42:00 PM

    I love the torment,and gripping detail in your poem,powerful.....But, truly the death of the Destroyer is quite a sad concept~Thanks for dropping in on me love~keep in touch xxoos~

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 9:34:00 PM

    Sometimes ascension entails more pain, however,suffering breathes knowledge - I like your controlled confusion - With respect, J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 10:02:00 AM

    We will miss you, oh Poet of destruction, but will try to catch you on the inner, that formless dimension. Love, daver

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 9:08:00 PM

    That last line is hauntingly beautiful. This is one of my favorites by you. Great write.

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 5:49:00 PM

    i love the ending! beautiful piece. thanks for sponsoring great contests. and thanks for your great comments!

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 1:18:00 AM

    Sentimental piece PD, intricately interwoven with enigmatic thoughts. The last statement is positive! Thanks for following my work. I have not been so actively involve in PS lately. I do love this website though. Please keep sharing. Your works stand out among the great poetess in PS. Have a wonderful night. Dalila

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 9:21:00 PM

    Oh my gosh..I think u accidentally blocked me...I wrote a comment on this one when u posted it way back...love it just the same. gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 4:24:00 PM

    This tugs at poetic strings with a deep sadness. To live is to learn...to learn is to live. Words on a page, entrusting self to paper and pen. I'm glad this has a happy ascension...Hope and pray all is well !! I never know quite how to respond to this type of poetry. You ooze with strength which shows in your poetry style.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:34:00 AM

    Wow,PD this is wonderful!

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 1:55:00 AM

    it's almost friday there, PD?.... shoot the breeze and have fun!... can't comment yet on blogs; i get system error, arggh!.... :) hugggs

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 11:13:00 PM

    Tex, just saying hello, have a peaceful weekend..David

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 7:44:00 AM

    Hey PD, you better post a different picture if I'm to believe this sad rendition of you. You're the picture of health and blooming so this, although interesting, isn't my inner view of who you are. Give me one I can believe! :) Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 12:50:00 PM

    just thought about you and wanted to say, " have a fine, fine, day", PD..:) huggs!

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