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Spider's Web

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Spider's Web

So here I am again
in redundancy I'll say hello
living life behind this screen
dreaming of a world most obscene

I wait, eager for response
Clicking refresh once more
My world inside a spider's web
in this fantasy I'm still no celeb

I can hear the sound of keystrokes
breaking the silence of a lost voice
Speaking only in the form of text
This part of me the world rejects

I'm at wits end words falling loose
and landing upon so bright a screen
breaking away the ever growing darkness
as my existence fades into evanescence

I'll take only this brief moment here
and wish those of you I remember farewell
For as this night descends to black
It is time that my real life is taken back


 


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  1. Date: 6/6/2012 12:31:00 PM

    This is a deep one..filled with emotions..Love the imagery and the rhythm.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/6/2012 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by...and by all means I do understand what you are talking about..hint..your comment on Diane's poem..lol Thanks again.