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A Good Appearance With A Bad Intention

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A Good Appearance With A Bad Intention

My adored is here, Oh Vincent! Charming with your perfume's scent not minding if it costs just 50 cent. Wishing to lean on you and form a crescent on your well endowed body which is like an expensive present. Stealing a kiss from me is decent but pulling me back and forcefully keeping my legs bent; even with my resistance, you would not relent makes you a pathetic Dog 100 percent. And I am regretful of my time badly spent. I escaped, when you were a little complacent as you rudely smiled like a badly trained Adolescent. And all these while, I thought you were innocent. How dare you try to penetrate without passing through my consent? Now that the beast in you, you represent, the only thing I have to say to you is REPENT!

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:12:00 PM

    Very thought provoking... the images were all too vivid in mind (if not slightly uncomfortable to imagine)... your title is also very good. Some people look well and good on the outside, but a beast can hide behind the mask. I'm beginning to really like your poems... and thanks so much for taking a look at some of mine today :)

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 3/23/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh dear! Thanks a lot Timothy Hicks
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:56:00 PM

    There is a lot of room for interpretation in this poem! I love it, great rhyme too! Nice write :)

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 11/6/2012 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a lot Anne Currin
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:56:00 PM

    Very mysterious..Light & Love

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 10/15/2012 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Debbies Guzzi
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 6:38:00 PM

    A very moving read. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this. A poignant and powerful read. Thank you for sharing!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 9/21/2012 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow! Thanks a lot Suzanne C. Goudreau
  1. Date: 7/23/2012 8:07:00 AM

    First of all sorry I haven't answered your commnets on my poetry but I have just recovered from an illness thanks to God and I will reply better fromnow on, you are excellent in your writtings and may the Lord bless you in your life, God bless bob

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 7/23/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Bob
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 7:36:00 AM

    great write,great journey,great decision,love it Funom

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/28/2012 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Richard
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 2:26:00 AM

    Glad you enjoyed my"Forgiven" poem. I enjoyed your poem. Hope you survived OK. Cheers, Maureen

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/27/2012 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for your comment.
  1. Date: 6/23/2012 11:46:00 AM

    powerful words my friend ,like it very much great write

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/24/2012 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kasim
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 7:10:00 AM

    thank you for your insight on my poetry and thank you for viewing them, now this is one of your best I think, congradulations on a fine piece of poetry, Keep the juices and intent going you are headed in the right direction, because of poetslike you poetry soup can an has made a differnce in people lives God bless bob

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/15/2012 3:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow! This is a lovely comment...
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 10:32:00 AM

    You are better off without Vincent. Good thing he showed his true rakish ways before the affair went any further. Good write. Love, daver

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/14/2012 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeah.. You are totally right daver// Thanks
  1. Date: 6/13/2012 9:42:00 AM

    WOW! Love it!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/13/2012 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks!
  1. Date: 6/12/2012 12:57:00 PM

    Good for you! Enjoyed this powerful write, my friend

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/12/2012 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Jack!
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 10:14:00 PM

    wow, you TELL him. What a cad. I really like how you portrayed this situation, a well written poem!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 11:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 7:27:00 PM

    Good for you! Nice win in the presence of mean selfishness. Well written Funam Makama !

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 11:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Robert
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Wow this is beautifully written. Thanks for sharing...A

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 4:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Asheka
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Excellent work..I enjoyed the rhyme and flow of the work..Creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 4:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 8:21:00 AM

    Beautiful poem with a nice analysis of human behaviour which makes our behaviour adorable or disdainful. Love and best wishes...Ravindra

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Totally right Ravindra.... Thanks a lot
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 8:10:00 AM

    I loved the line' leaned on me like an expensive present'...that is a brilliant metaphor!. You have a very interesting style. Michael

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a lot Michael
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 8:09:00 AM

    that's a very heartfelt expressed poem, nice rhyme. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Erich, God bless you too
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 8:03:00 AM

    "My adored is here, if only you acknowledge my consent", Well written poem,love those lines,dear Funom,you are my favoret,Thank you Ivy

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh, so sweet to know.. Thanks a lot ismeta
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 7:48:00 AM

    Dear Funom This packs a wallop. "like a badly trained adolescent" - what a line. thank you for your kind comment on my "poem" poem. It's so gratifying to know people are reading. love, Kathy

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Kathryn
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 7:01:00 AM

    Funom, I like this, it leaves the reader wanting a bit more, thanks for your comments...David

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeah, I also feel that way whenever I read it too.. its my most read Poem (Of mine).
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:04:00 AM

    You have weaved your words beautifully in this write Funom! I loved it ...Samia

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks samia
  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:05:00 AM

    Great write....flowed well to read and you had some really nice rhyme going on. Well done...! Be strong

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:41:00 AM

    Wow this is beauty, wow i am astonished and inspired

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/8/2012 3:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Moeka
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 8:31:00 AM

    Lovely, a lot of sense, cents & scents sent in here...grins. You write very well, a wonderful flow...cheers..m

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/7/2012 9:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mike
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 6:26:00 PM

    You are awesome.. excellent poem, thank you for sharing~ Always PD

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/7/2012 3:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 3:06:00 PM

    Always a pleasure to read your poems Funom, thank you for this to day. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/6/2012 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Annie Lise
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 2:54:00 PM

    Great job, I will be read more of your poems.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama Date: 6/6/2012 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Sandra
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 2:44:00 PM

    Thanks a lot friends.

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