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A Good Appearance With A Bad Intention

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A Good Appearance With A Bad Intention

My adored is here, Oh Vincent! Charming with your perfume's scent not minding if it costs just 50 cent. Wishing to lean on you and form a crescent on your well endowed body which is like an expensive present. Stealing a kiss from me is decent but pulling me back and forcefully keeping my legs bent; even with my resistance, you would not relent makes you a pathetic Dog 100 percent. And I am regretful of my time badly spent. I escaped, when you were a little complacent as you rudely smiled like a badly trained Adolescent. And all these while, I thought you were innocent. How dare you try to penetrate without passing through my consent? Now that the beast in you, you represent, the only thing I have to say to you is REPENT!

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  1. Date: 7/30/2014 9:43:00 AM
    well said

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 8/4/2014 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Vicki
  1. Date: 7/30/2014 9:35:00 AM
    Nicely done. This piece is a great work! ^^

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 8/4/2014 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Doris
  1. Date: 7/29/2014 2:45:00 PM
    Love it.. I wouldn't change a thing!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 8/4/2014 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Jim
  1. Date: 7/28/2014 1:48:00 PM
    Your heartfelt poem touched me. I do not know if it is from a personal experience or not, but I read it as such. Those in a position of power be it money, politics, or in this case a person who is admired, should not abuse that power but wield it carefully. You brought out many images of this man who turned from being admired to one who was considered a beast. Many times a woman is considered a person who invites such atrocities when in fact it is the beast in the man that ventures forth. Great.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are so right Margaret... So right! Thank you so much for your beautiful words.
  1. Date: 7/28/2014 3:54:00 AM
    Innocence is a magic word to whom world is longing. I like this type of verses including a direct and an allusive inner ethics. It may be read as an ars poetica, too. Rationality and irationality as pulses of human life. The problem is not to control them, but to construe the Acceptable as a term of life itself. Best regards and wishes

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your words blow my mind away.. What an honor and privilege to have them on my page. Thanks a lot Ovidu Bocsa
  1. Date: 7/28/2014 1:13:00 AM
    Wow, what a piece of art this is. well penned. i enjoyed reading it!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Bongani Zungu.
  1. Date: 7/27/2014 5:23:00 PM
    Awesome, simply awesome wording :)

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Debbie... Its really been a while
  1. Date: 7/27/2014 3:50:00 PM
    I love the way how the poem lead the reader to an interpretation of what is happening This is good,Funom! LoveLots, Ara

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you alot Arabelle for liking the poem. I really appreciate it.
  1. Date: 7/27/2014 3:36:00 PM
    Excellent write! I love the title, and the poem even more. At times 'badly trained adolescent' is as much as men amount to. Well done!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Conor ONeil. Its been a while
  1. Date: 7/27/2014 2:42:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Modupe
  1. Date: 7/27/2014 2:00:00 PM
    I like the way your poem came together with a conclusion. Thanks for sharing.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading and the wonderful complement Rowdy Yates
  1. Date: 7/27/2014 1:46:00 PM
    This fantastic poem funom I really love reading it, thumbs up.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot buggie Felix
  1. Date: 7/27/2014 1:46:00 PM
    Wonderful write on the sensitive not needing a boytoy and how inconciderate today men are.lovely view

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Jennifer... Anyway, not all men are like that, but this is a reflection of this particular unfortunate situation
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:12:00 PM
    Very thought provoking... the images were all too vivid in mind (if not slightly uncomfortable to imagine)... your title is also very good. Some people look well and good on the outside, but a beast can hide behind the mask. I'm beginning to really like your poems... and thanks so much for taking a look at some of mine today :)

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/23/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh dear! Thanks a lot Timothy Hicks
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:56:00 PM
    There is a lot of room for interpretation in this poem! I love it, great rhyme too! Nice write :)

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 11/6/2012 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot Anne Currin
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:56:00 PM
    Very mysterious..Light & Love

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 10/15/2012 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Debbies Guzzi
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 6:38:00 PM
    A very moving read. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this. A poignant and powerful read. Thank you for sharing!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 9/21/2012 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wow! Thanks a lot Suzanne C. Goudreau
  1. Date: 7/23/2012 8:07:00 AM
    First of all sorry I haven't answered your commnets on my poetry but I have just recovered from an illness thanks to God and I will reply better fromnow on, you are excellent in your writtings and may the Lord bless you in your life, God bless bob

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/23/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Bob
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 7:36:00 AM
    great write,great journey,great decision,love it Funom

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 6/28/2012 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Richard
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 2:26:00 AM
    Glad you enjoyed my"Forgiven" poem. I enjoyed your poem. Hope you survived OK. Cheers, Maureen

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 6/27/2012 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for your comment.
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