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All My Firsts With you

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All My Firsts With you

When I first viewed your pictures in the net I knew I saw an Angel yet to be discovered. When I first sent you a message my hope of having a heavenly experience with you was created. When I first read your response, I felt so fulfilled and accomplished. When I first talked to you through the Phone, you made me so warm, Tender and calm. When I first chat with you, I realized how lucky I am to behold a rare germ and a wonderful companion. When I first saw you laugh, you sounded soft and too feminine to be real. After my first physical acquaintance with you, I was already so scared of missing you. When I first hugged and held you tightly, I prayed you will be mine and mine alone forever. When I first kissed you, I knew I have fallen in Love with you already. When I missed you passionately for the first time, I vowed never to allow you out of my sight again. You are my first lady, the first to mother my Children. The first to make them 3 and the first to watch them grow with me. If there would ever be a second to any or some or all of these experiences, you'd be the first to be second or even third or even the hundredth and all.

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  1. Date: 6/6/2013 6:16:00 AM
    Beautiful...

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 6/7/2013 2:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:53:00 AM
    Ah to be first and to fall in love and then to love.... very nice Asheka

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 11/24/2012 1:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Asheka
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 8:55:00 PM
    wow what lovely words, must be great to be a first. just as great to have such a person. Thanks for your great comments on my "What if" poem. I did appreciate it. Seren

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 9/21/2012 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot seren roberts
  1. Date: 7/7/2012 9:02:00 AM
    Very well expressed. Tingling!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/7/2012 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks
  1. Date: 6/12/2012 5:24:00 PM
    loved it and thanks for the kind words on my page

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 6/13/2012 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Selena
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 10:41:00 AM
    Romantic and passionate.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for reading and commenting at my poem page.......

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 6/11/2012 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kash
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 8:19:00 AM
    Fukon...very touching nd innocent. suggest you go back and edit the lt line of second verse. I m sure you meant to say " a rare gem' nd not ' rre germ'...although telling someone they are a rare germ would equally be a first! Great poem though.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 6/11/2012 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Michael... I think you did not see it properly.... It is written as "rare" But thanks for the observation..
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:04:00 AM
    That was a lovely romantic poem, and I love the repetition of "The first". I have repetition in some of my poetry. Thank you for reading mine, by the way. Two more beauties coming up. Keep up the good work Funom. Your lady sounds very special!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 6/11/2012 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Diane... It's funny to know I'm still single (never married)..
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 7:39:00 AM
    Thanks a lot friends..

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 7:34:00 AM
    A lovely romantic poem written here!!

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 7:32:00 AM
    This is sOOoow beautiful written Funom...love it....yoy are brilliant ! - Thank you for visit mine poem and you are always welcome. :) - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise