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Heavenly Father

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Heavenly Father

Heavenly Father Our World . . .

shakes
every time you walk

crumbles
when your anger rages

floods 
every time you cry

dark 
till your light shines

thunders
When you speak

you teach us lessons

hurt
to prove we are alive

love
so we are not alone 

loss
so we may become strong

LIFE
so we may have stories to tell in the land of gold

you've given us everything . . .
so at the end we give you are soul

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 2:34:00 AM
    Well done my friend ;-)

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 9:56:00 AM
    This is a powerful poem with good description. A good outloook on life too. God bless you, Isaiah

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:38:00 AM
    excellent write, looking forward to read more from you. God bless you, Gordon

    Melody Avatar Winter Melody
    Date: 10/25/2012 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :)
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 5:16:00 PM
    This is a very good prayer/poem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Melody Avatar Winter Melody
    Date: 8/31/2012 9:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :)