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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:44:00 AM
    A beuatiful natural phenomenon captured in verse! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 3:29:00 PM
    Well, that explains alot. Too bad human morae's aren't so understanding. :)

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 8:49:00 AM
    Gwen love it, send some over here will you..David

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 9:56:00 PM
    Hi Gwen-Love he second line-brilliant. I heard about R. Dawson, and I actually thought of you. I remember when your family challenged my family to play. But, then you said you were too scared-LOL :) Anytime you want...I'll send in the tape. RIP Richard, btw. Love, Natalie

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 9:32:00 PM
    I am so glad you explained this one. I was imagining a pair of Cabbage patch dolls dancing together. hahaha. (never heard of that name of butterfly before. They sound awesome)

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 7:21:00 PM
    Gwendolen, this is a beautiful haiku! Thanks tor sharing the interesting facts. Glad to see you writing. I hope you're feeling better. Soupmail...Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 6:55:00 PM
    Very interesting facts about butterflies - I can now picture your wrods so much better.

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 6:09:00 PM
    Your explanatory note enables me to enjoy the poem fully about these lovely white butterflies ..but strange it is that they are called sulphur, jag

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 6:02:00 PM
    Great topic for a haiku! I learned something fascinating from this. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 4:58:00 PM
    GWENDOLYN, I don't know what haikus are. Your bottom note makes it all possible.,,Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA }!{

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:52:00 PM
    This write is truly amazing Gwendolen! I really love the excitement this poem creates with the dance between the "white sulphur pair"! Thank you for the explanation, it was very insightful and I just love learning new things! Awesome write, Great Work!!

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    Date: 6/4/2012 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Who needs a poetry cheerleader when I have Russell Sivey on my side? hahah...Your words are kind...Gotta go study my orange rose bush for tomorrow's haiku. I read that u have one also... Take care! G-O BiG RED MACHINE!!!