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Grey Rabbit White Paper

Grey rabbit... White paper...


I am the grey rabbit
Snared, trapped by restrictive wires
Unseen
I reach for the quill of significance
Yet she teases
Just a tug too far
Ink wells spilt upon verde grass
Parchment paper
Leaves me parched
I cannot paint nor write
My fluffy tails lost it's sheen
I'm off down the burrow
To lick my wounds
And
Ensure my hovels clean

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  1. Date: 6/13/2012 5:44:00 PM

    You have such an interesting and creative style. I'm not good at this kind of free verse but I enjoy reading it the way you do it!

    Deeks Avatar Karen Deeks Date: 6/13/2012 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you that really is a compliment... karen
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 4:36:00 PM

    Hi,Karen i think your poem is cool LOL Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA }!{

    Deeks Avatar Karen Deeks Date: 6/5/2012 3:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello sylvia... tyvm for reading my write and liking it...karen :)