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Stay By My Side, Angel

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Stay By My Side, Angel

Frozen in time for a very long time
Until you twinked my time and scrubbed off the grime
From my heart...from my heart 
It beats in rhythm heart is pumping with joy!
You took heart and tore apart
The blasphemy that molded me into this monster
That pierced me like an arrow...striking a bull's eye
Now I can't shake off the dread, I'm sorry for breaking down in front of you

I just can't function...without your heartfelt blessings 
Hovering around me...lingering by my side

*still working on this poem...the other part got deleted X(*

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  1. Date: 6/4/2012 6:57:00 PM
    sorry fine poets....unfortunately, my brother's iPhone deleted this was I have to do it all over again.... :(

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 2:52:00 PM
    Hi,David I just want to say thank you for such a wonderful poem Its lovely!!=] ,,Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA }!{

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    Date: 6/4/2012 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) tanks Have a great week . I'll, without a doubt, read your poems someday.