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Window Birdfeeder

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Window Birdfeeder



window bird feeder

brings joy to my coffee break...
                                                 a


                                                    mess

                                                               lies
                                               
                                                                      below !


Backyard Haiku Series
Gwendolen R.
6-3-12



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  1. Date: 6/4/2012 10:49:00 AM

    This poem brings joy to my night here...!:) Jag

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 5:05:00 AM

    Gwendolen , no truer words than this haiku,the joy of hearing and seeing our little feathered friends out weigh the mess. Delightful Haiku .Appreciate your comments. Hugs !!!! Anne

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 10:57:00 PM

    you ended this with a bang so full of wonderful surprise, gwenie.. love the format too... re my streetchildren, there are a million or so in the philippines... and as a counselor as well, this situation breaks my heart... happy day to you, hon!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:28:00 PM

    oh my that is so cute. Wonderful how you formatted it too, Gwen.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:18:00 PM

    What a lovely image! LOL! Creative, humorous and ironic. Good one, Gwendolen! Ruben.... You dont need the quotation mark.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 2:44:00 PM

    This is true about bird feeders - well worth the 'mess' though to see the visitors up close.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:27:00 PM

    Enjoyed the creativity here!Did u delete some of your poems?Why?

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/3/2012 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will post answer over at your place....u really like it?...I struggled to make it look like bird droppings...this is all my artist mind could conjure. lol.
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:46:00 PM

    Ah yes, this is certainly true my friend! My parents have many bird feeders around their house! They enjoy looking at all the different birds in Ohio! And they have the inevitable mess underneath the feeders! and on them! I love your timeless write Gwendolen!...truly great! Awesome Work!!

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/3/2012 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Let me clone you and your love of wife for the entire male species, dear Russ! hahah. So moving a comment!
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:45:00 PM

    Wonderful style of presentation, loved always, bl

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/3/2012 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Bird droppings in a poetic art! lol.
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:36:00 PM

    Nicely done Gwen, like it. Look for feather in your coffee. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Gwen, ha ha I just tend to stick them in a pie, he he he...David

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:29:00 PM

    I enjoyed your coffee break today,Graceland Hottie!:-) Lovely imagery here! Have a great Ohio Sunday across the Soup bowl.Hugs,Arild