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Fragile Memory

"Let me down..."
"Let me down..."
Echoes through my head,
It's all that I remember
Of what someone
Once Said.

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  1. Date: 6/19/2012 8:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Simon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 9:08:00 AM

    Love this piece!!

    Henderson Avatar Simon Henderson Date: 6/4/2012 10:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much.....
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 2:21:00 PM

    Interesting work..Sara

    Henderson Avatar Simon Henderson Date: 6/3/2012 2:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.....it was originally supposed to be a much longer piece but when i got to the end i just decided to stop as it seemed complete
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:08:00 PM

    Welcome to P-Soup Simon, hope you will write, read and comments back alot of poem here on P-Soup. - You do it so well in this small poem. - Have fun with poetry. - Love and hallo from Norway and me Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:50:00 AM

    Beautiful in fragility and vision... i knew this would make me cry, i am the keeper of someones memories...lovely lovely piece...

    Henderson Avatar Simon Henderson Date: 6/3/2012 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I wrote this many years ago.....It's nice to know it can still have a good effect on people!!