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Indifferent Love

She stood at the sink 
with her head in her hands.

Fully knowing this wasn't
the life she'd planned.

Life's seasons  were getting
shorter and colder.

Her bones sing their misery
both louder and boulder.

Drained by the cruelty of
a love gone indifferent.

Inside she crumbles seeking
strength now unapparent.

A glimmer of hope looms
in a distant light.

Her prayers will soon be answered
and end her plight.  

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  1. Date: 8/4/2012 6:05:00 PM
    Heartbreaking write Terry....well done! Hugs.

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 1:47:00 PM
    A very touching write .Enjoyed.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 6/5/2012 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kash Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 10:46:00 AM
    A lot of emotion in this one... very moving... very nice... Terry

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 6/4/2012 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Helloooo Terry. So glad you have stopped by ~smile~. Thanks for your praise and kind review. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:10:00 AM
    Could feel the life draining away, excellent piece.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 6/3/2012 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This was an old woman I knew in my neighborhood and I watched her just fade away. I guess she had had enough. At the end the neighbors took turns stopping by to care for her as he didn't. Thanks for your kind review. TLee
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:50:00 AM
    Super poem dear!!!! I enjoyed It much!!!

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 6/3/2012 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Elliott thanks for coming by to review so glad you enjoyed it. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:36:00 AM
    A fine write and a pleasure to read this morning dear poet ! Have a wonderful day....much love, james

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 6/3/2012 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you James for your kind words and kindness to stop by to review. TLee