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Bear and Salmon

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Bear and Salmon

Bear.....

stone clad shores
welt beneath your warmth
fir lined trees
stand silent in your presence
misted waters raise to greet a vibrant sky in jubilation

as salmon fight ferocious rapids
you
intent
listen and watch
baited breath
silent

your cumbersome claw hovers as a wieghtless mosquito
dancing hithertoo
for that oh so perfect
catch

titanium
spray
avoids your touch
end the salmon's day

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  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:45:00 AM

    this is no teddy bear. Okay - what is tyvm?

    Deeks Avatar Karen Deeks
    Date: 6/3/2012 1:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh sorry kathryn tyvm is thank you very much... :)
    Deeks Avatar Karen Deeks
    Date: 6/3/2012 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty for reading dear kathryn ... there certainly isnt though i did believe in teddy bears once,,, karen
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 2:53:00 AM

    the patience of a bear in need, who hovers silent for a feed, 4 a fish to suicide.... love it

    Deeks Avatar Karen Deeks
    Date: 6/3/2012 2:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    tyvm don, for your thoughts and comments....karen