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What my eyes show me

I am afraid of what my eyes show me
They show me violence instead of peace
But true love is what i wish to see

     They trick me
     They deceive me
     In relationships they blind me

They make my heart stone
Because of them, to me real love is unknown
I try not to love what my eyes see
Because later i realize it's not what it use to be

I try to follow my heart and what it feels
But these deceiving eyes store feelings using a tight seal
Tomorrow will be longer, but my heart will grow stronger
And it'll someday be free, but until that day

I am afraid of what my eyes show me

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  1. Date: 6/6/2012 5:52:00 AM

    This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

    Humes Avatar Ashley Humes Date: 6/6/2012 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! Im glad you liked it and i sure will stop by you page.
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 10:55:00 PM

    This is deeply spoken!! Enjoyed!

    Humes Avatar Ashley Humes Date: 6/4/2012 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Im glad you liked it.
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 10:33:00 AM

    " Very Heartfelt Moment, Cause The Eye's Do Decieve And Blind You, When You Don't Know What Life Can Throw Back At You.. Great Write. Carma"

    Humes Avatar Ashley Humes Date: 6/4/2012 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So true, thank you for your comment.
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:40:00 AM

    Ashley - I can very much relate to your poem. Your heart does gain strength that I can assure you! Well done - Shaz

    Humes Avatar Ashley Humes Date: 6/4/2012 9:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your comment. :)