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Heaven's Doorway

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Heaven's Doorway

Not just what I expected but beyond
Scenery so appealing there’s no word to describe this
No such thing as uncomfortable or timid 
Only invitation, simplicity, liberation, amusement, the works!
Each breath makes me feel brand new
Each footstep encourages me to glide, skip and wiggle my toes even
Sounds blended hitting the ear with confidence
Perfection knows no sharps or flats
Life’s weight lifted from these bodies revealing immaculately beautiful souls
This land has no hierarchy, no worry, no schedule, no walls, no ceiling
Just foundation
That foundation is God
It’s no wonder these souls can fly!
And all of this I’ve seen as I make my way up the steps 
To Heaven’s Doorway

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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:58:00 PM

    nice imagination and brilliant description .'' Heaven means to be one with God"(Confucius ).thank you for sharing .jk

    Insignificant Avatar Comfortably Insignificant Date: 6/21/2012 12:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, WOW! Thanks for the info haha I'm glad Confucius and I agree on what Heaven is
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 12:25:00 PM

    amen. i wrote one just like this few years back..Glory! :)

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 11:17:00 PM

    I felt I was there at one time,and your words are true.Discribed beautifuly!(Soup mail)

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 8:08:00 PM

    I love how you ended it Brittany..nicely done..hugs...Joseph

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:39:00 AM

    Lovely!! Excellent!! SuperB!! Lovely imagery!! This is a masterpiece... Keep it up Brittany! Love, Kbillion

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 2:19:00 PM

    Ahhh...so sweet and tender!!! Loving the imagery here!! Excellent write!!! Keep burning!!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Soup mail!!
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:54:00 PM

    Very pretty description of Heaven

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 11:56:00 AM

    UTTERLY STUNNING POEM!!! I LOVE IT!!!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 10:48:00 AM

    beautiful write indeed, Brittany

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 9:41:00 AM

    Beautiful images in this gem.... love it....gald you smile at my Appetite Touched piece always nice to touch a new friend ...hugs Michael