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What I Miss Most

What I miss most, is your smile.
   I grab a picture and stare awhile.
What I miss most is our inside jokes.
   Not funny to other folks.
What I miss most is your determination and strong will.
   The only person to always keep it real.
What I miss most is your input and advice.
   You always said, "they better treat you nice".
What I miss most is our many games of shooting pool.
   Entering all the tournaments, because we were so cool.
What I miss most is seeing you walk into a room.
   You were taken away far too soon!!!!
What I really miss the most is, my best friend, my nephew, my little man.
   Forever, i'm your biggest fan!!!!

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  1. Date: 6/6/2012 5:46:00 AM

    This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 7:24:00 AM

    Another heartfelt write here Brittney!!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:51:00 PM

    Never easy to lose someone.... I loved your poem I could tell he meant a lot to you.

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 5:11:00 PM

    To love and lose someone so close to you must be tough! Continue to vent through you poetry to keep a more stable mind <3