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Broken as the skin of my arms and wrists

Show irreplaceble damage

Damage I compare to the losing of a limb 

Or the permanence of a tattoo

There is nothing it can do to clear its name


Has been unfair

There's always been a foggy motive in between

To go without the other

Is to lose something you want or need

I have hope

In my survival I need not be reliant	

But dependent upon myself

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  1. Date: 6/21/2012 11:48:00 AM

    Find those true few and stick with them no matter what- you'll be ok

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 1:34:00 PM

    When one is careless with the 'T' in Trust, all that remains is RUST, it could be bad. Brittany, thanks for the 'big meat' comment that you dropped in my pot on the poetrysoup. Much luv...

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 9:47:00 PM

    Your last two lines are extremely significant... Once you have been betrayed, it is hard to re-establish trust, with anyone. It is something that is so hard to forgive, and calls all our relationships into question. Well said, Brittany... Best wishes, Keith

    Insignificant Avatar Comfortably Insignificant Date: 6/2/2012 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 4:01:00 PM

    So true!! I agree..I find it hard to be in a relationship at times because of trust!! But we have to know that in life there are trials and errors..we must move on.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/1/2012 4:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyed this write here!!!