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Sweet-er Sensation

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Sweet-er Sensation

Underneath, you above,
Hold me close,like a glove,
You whisper my name,"yes love",
Meant to be,white doves....

You lean forward, I lean back,
You pull my jeans,I lift your top,
You bite your lips,I hit the spot,
We tremble like leaves,and then collapse...

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  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:41:00 AM
    This is sweet I like it a lot. : ) LUV~Sammie~

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 9/21/2012 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Samantha,luv Sammie
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 10:01:00 AM
    Sweet passion.....excellent write!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 7/30/2012 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Cecilia
  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Nicely written...thanks for stopping by...luv shannon

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 7/3/2012 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Shannon
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 5:47:00 PM
    We tremble like leaves..great phrase!! steamy rhyme..Light & Love

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/19/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Debbie
  1. Date: 6/12/2012 1:21:00 AM
    Soothing!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/12/2012 5:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Bhavna
  1. Date: 6/9/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Beautiful Write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing Richard.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/9/2012 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Ravi,happy you did
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:03:00 PM
    Wow I like it :3

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/6/2012 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Hanna,happy to please
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 3:08:00 AM
    Great! Steaming and passionate write, Richard! Ruben.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/5/2012 5:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Ruben
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 8:35:00 PM
    Wow! exuberating excellence!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/3/2012 8:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS,Jesssica
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 2:38:00 PM
    Yes, indeed a sweet-er sensation, Richard!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/2/2012 4:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i was gonna name it sweet-HER,lol,thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 8:44:00 AM
    lol..loved it specially last verseve.. Jah' love!!! always...

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/2/2012 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Carma,one love
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 11:06:00 PM
    Nice and sweet Richard, hugs vie

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/2/2012 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Vienna,xoxoxo
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 8:09:00 PM
    Nice work Richard - I enjoyed greatly. Thanks for taking the time to read my work as well.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 8:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Anthony,you are welcome
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 9:16:00 AM
    I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Richard. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us for many years to come. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will,thanks alot Carol
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 8:00:00 AM
    This is a classic piece of art you have here..enjoyed!! Very smooth!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    happy to please,Super Ink
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 6:39:00 AM
    oh wow nice one Richard xx

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Golden Girl,thanks alot
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 6:36:00 AM
    Sweet and romantic poem Richard, love it. - Well done. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 7:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    always like keeping you happy,thanks Anne
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 6:32:00 AM
    Nicely scripted. Classy work poet!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks alot aim to please,lol