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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/8/2012 12:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2012 9:46:00 PM

Joann, yup... still love it... and thank you for answering my question on the bottom... congrats on your win..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2012 8:40:00 PM

i do remember this one and how I loved it. Congrats on your win.

Gail DeBole

Date: 6/7/2012 5:41:00 PM

Joann - Your poem beautifully captures the way death fits into life. Congrats! - Gail

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/7/2012 2:27:00 PM

Interesting emotive work..Enjoyed reading a winner...Congrats..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/7/2012 2:24:00 PM

So true and I for one am glad of it ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Samia Ali Arroyo

Date: 6/7/2012 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations for your win for this excellent poem! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2012 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the 181 contest Joann. Love, Carol

kash poet

Date: 6/7/2012 2:54:00 AM

Excellent!!Congrats on your win.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/7/2012 1:41:00 AM

Great poem... Congrats... Terry

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/2/2012 1:29:00 PM

so true - doesn't seem right, does it? shoiuldn't there be a pause or a lull or an eclipse to mark your passing?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2012 7:45:00 PM

yes, life does go on and on and on and you captured it just that way!!

daver austin

Date: 6/1/2012 11:58:00 AM

Great lay out for last thoughts. Like your style so much. Love, daver

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/1/2012 11:09:00 AM

By the title, I thought this would be depressing but not at all. It's wonderfully hopeful and comforting for me. I love how you emphasized life going on in all it's beauty and children playing. The children are the hope. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

harry horsman

Date: 6/1/2012 10:44:00 AM

Yes indeed life goes on, and this poem is a wonderful way to describe the event. like this. Joann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2012 6:33:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Joann as always. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/31/2012 9:20:00 PM

What an insightful write! I really enjoyed the complexity and the simplicity of the entire poem! I think your write is unique and brilliant! Great Work!

DON JOHNSON

Date: 5/31/2012 8:59:00 PM

the world still turns, though passion burns, if the veil is crossed today, we carry the total experience learned, as our spirit wafts away.... thank you Joan Grisetti..."I Lay Dying" Don

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2012 5:49:00 PM

Hello, Joann ;-) your free versing, has style. Even after death, you painted a pretty picture through your words,, I love the ending moments, very pretty indeed.. I can imagine a life of comfort, This sure has inspiration, if one has to feel while dying, What brought upon this poem??. Thank you always..PD.

Joann Grisetti Date: 5/31/2012 6:14:00 PM

I am not sure sometimes where poems come from. I was in bed, listening to the children next door playing (school's last day) and I had to get up early and was trying to sleep. The words just come and I write them.

SCRIBE ML

Date: 5/31/2012 3:37:00 PM

As the world turns...go of write!

SCRIBE ML Date: 5/31/2012 3:37:00 PM

Good write*

Catie Lindsey

Date: 5/31/2012 2:45:00 PM

yes, life will go on without me! That's the good news! :) Hugs, Catie :)

Mystic Rose

Date: 5/31/2012 2:42:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem Joann, sending you hugs vie

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/31/2012 2:01:00 PM

From the title, I was expecting to read something similar to a work by the late William Faulkner. I now see that is not the case. Good work.

Joann Grisetti Date: 5/31/2012 5:35:00 PM

I don't believe I've ever read Faulkner. Thank you for your comments.

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