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Nearsighted

 Painted lies 
Erase truth 
I'm lost in my dreams 
You was the horrible awaken reality 
Thus forgetting the world behind me
 I was blinded 
By what was standing in front me 
I wasn’t expect anything less
 But I gain a whole lot of broken smiles
 Physical length of the eye
 Shown me u was the man of my nightmare 
Your lips spoke every right word
 Our heart seems equal 
You added the lies
 And subtracted the truth 
A man I thought I would never lose 
Staring into your eyes should be a crime
 It's an incredible invisible force
 I wish I never even laid my eyes on
 A sign I forgot to read 
Instruction I forgot to follow 
Loveless eyes 
In your eyes I see what could have been

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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 5:36:00 AM

    Very deep poem. I love the wording. The opening lines just draws you in.

    horan Avatar danielle horan Date: 5/31/2012 9:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks love for reading