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  1. Date: 5/18/2013 2:49:00 AM
    Somehow I see this as a tear, trickling her way to an ocean of sadness? happiness? peace? I'd like to think some sort of acceptance though-- or oops maybe I read too much into poems sometimes, on how I think I would have written them? There is a lightheartedness here & I just really enjoyed this one. I wish you well on your book, I am one who believes that when the right time comes, it will in some way want to be completed. Sort of gushing & begging you to be written. I hope that comes soon!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:58:00 PM
    The diamond shape of this poem adds a gentle structure to the soft, flowing simplicity of the work. I like it a lot, Caleb. -Jeremy

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  1. Date: 6/8/2012 5:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your "trickling" win!

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:06:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Caleb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:32:00 PM
    Great way to go..Enjoyed the topic..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 1:14:00 PM
    Beautiful Caleb! Congrats on your win!...Tanya

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:39:00 PM
    CALEB , Congratulations with your fun "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:45:00 PM
    Congrats Caleb on your win.Beautiful and Mystical.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:52:00 AM
    the tone of your piece mystifies,caleb.. so proud of you.. congrats on your win in my gig!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:26:00 AM
    Caleb congrats on your win, loved this first time around..David

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:05:00 AM
    I like this one - Wish you luck in contest Caleb! - Bravo!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 1:46:00 PM
    I like the personification here - good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:17:00 PM
    This really made me Smile, and your title for it is really very nice :D-- I was thinking of "trickle" as well since it's been raining here lately but ah, I think you did yours way better than what I would have come up with! Thank you for passing by my poem and also for entering my contest-- I am so glad you enjoyed it and do try more free verse, you sure wrote a wonderful one :D

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 9:18:00 AM
    A lovely journey you've described...little sad, the ending...Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 10:45:00 PM
    this is really cool, Caleb. I think it is so soft and pretty.

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:36:00 PM
    Good one Caleb...clever. BG

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:21:00 PM
    Caleb, well done and good luck..David