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Moonlight on the Seine

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Moonlight on the Seine

We watched the moonlight on La Seine Glissading down in gold refrains But now, it seems, as silence crept An old cliche' that time forgets ... The moon's façade disguised the pain... C'est la vie, what might be gained To cry again like bitter rain... For hearts have kept this old secret We watched the moon The same old songs have yet remained Where lyrics speak in whispers, kept A déjà vu, that lingers yet Of love that left us sweet regrets We watched the moon

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  1. Date: 8/10/2012 5:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#194" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 2:38:00 PM
    Wonderful theme for the lyrical rondeau, GREAT win, Carrie. Congratulations on this gem.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 2:31:00 PM
    WOW, beautiful, Carrie!! Congrats on another wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:12:00 PM
    lovely poem, Carrie. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Carrie congrats on your win, very good..David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:01:00 AM
    Very nice Carrie. Congratulations on your win. I was just on the Seine in May. Take care Lee

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:14:00 AM
    Congratulations Carrie another well deserved win xx

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. Wonderful, wonderful write. You are very talented.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 5:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:35:00 AM
    A belated congratulations Carrie on your placement in Cyndi's "Un, Deux, Trois" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 2:29:00 AM
    Carrie congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:13:00 PM
    c'est une piece de brilliance et tres beau ! Je l'aime beaucoup mon amie, Carrie! Thanks for the comment and as far as the oops..... c'est la guerre! :)

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 2:30:00 PM
    Great work that reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this Sunday afternoon..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 7:01:00 PM
    An enchanting, yet melancholy write dear poet. I love when the poets, squeeze the French out of me...*smiles* Great write Carrie ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 11:01:00 PM
    hey, you chose rondeau too!! It's one of the best I've seen!! it simply glissades!!!

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 2:45:00 PM
    Beautiful ans intriguing. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 11:27:00 AM
    ... I do not now exactly as unto why but, tis something about your loveliness, my dear beautiful Carrie * Everytime I see your face, my heart takes off on a high speeed chase ... Perhaps because your poetry reflects the essence within the softness, of your deepest beauty ... A beautiful favourite, to be cherished ... Love, tristen :)

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 10:39:00 AM
    Carrie - I like this lovely written poem, a pleasure to read all your poem - always. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 5/30/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ps. luck to you in contest!!!!
  1. Date: 5/30/2012 8:35:00 AM
    You are so romantique sweet Carrie,always sending me in a nice mood when i read your verse.. lovely,one for my favs..Charma

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 1:56:00 AM
    Carrie, love this, good luck..David