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Eagles Breath

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Below is the poem entitled Eagles Breath which was written by poet Karen Deeks. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Eagles Breath

The eagle smiles sharply
Smartly
He knows my need of gently stroked wings
Amidst shift shaping rocks
I am barely a translucent bubble
Blown through a Childs hoop
Wavering and lost in just one
Solitary breath

He may pierce me with his arrogant beak
May find me invisible within herringbone clouds
Yet still
I exist
I am here, I am her
I know that to be true
Due to
A pulse, due to a whimsical thought
And an ever hopeful will...

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  1. Date: 5/29/2012 7:44:00 PM

    wow Karen!!! This is poetry art!! Your word imagery is flawless, very nice descriptive undertone, this is very well written, well done

    Deeks Avatar Karen Deeks Date: 5/30/2012 3:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you michael for such a kind thoughtful review .....Karen :)