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HEAVEN'S DOORWAY

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HEAVEN'S DOORWAY



Blue tunnel glimmers where sky meets the ray in cadence of nightfall’s rare satin veil, the air flight grows misty in blooming sway as my soul climbs a ladder of bright trail; where heaven’s portal dips in moonlit spray. Awed by Mother Mary’s grace, here I pale clutching hands in prayer for all deeds wrong, then twice, thrice, harps release caressing song. First wafts of kisses glide like winding sparks I reach for Mom and Dad’s arms, gently mauve, beside them , my brothers crowned by night larks and in- between we share the bliss of love. Then comes my school mate, queen of stingy barks oh how we embrace peace thanking white Dove. Dear timeless realm where sweet harmony dwells, breaths of oneness chime for God’s final spells Ottava rima---10 syl count per line Heaven’s Doorway contest by Gail Doyle

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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 5:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your Heavenly win, Nette. So enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 3:38:00 PM
    congrats on your win Gail! And thank you for visiting my page:)) love and light aida

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:29:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your win in Gail's contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 8:54:00 AM
    Nette congrats on your great win..David

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:53:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win for this lovely poem! :)

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:26:00 PM
    hi Nette, Congratulations with your beautiful "HEAVEN'S DOORWAY” entry in Gail's contest. God Bless. ~always :-) PD

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:46:00 PM
    The way you put your words together amazes me every time...angel of words.

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 7:29:00 PM
    Another beauty Nette... lovely stopping in for some of your poems..Patrick

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:24:00 PM
    I'm back; I was checking my FAV poets...you were not there!! : ) I already fixed it! Enjoy the honor! LOL!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Exceptional! Amazing write, Nette! ...and a sure winner! Gayle will love it. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 10:15:00 AM
    Wonderful expression "God’s final spells", predetermined by God in advance. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:47:00 AM
    An amazing write from you Nette!!And the form is a challenging one.Loved it!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 10:13:00 PM
    Breathtaking imagery and I love the ottava rima. It flows like a cascading waterfall from the heavens! A winner for sure! Love and Blessings to you, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 7:19:00 PM
    Beautiful presentation, beguiling ink. " brothers crowned by nightlarks", is very unique!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 7:08:00 PM
    WOW,STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! SPECTACULAR IMAGERY!!!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 6:54:00 PM
    This is really a grandiose write my sweet friend! I just love the images you paint with your heart string paintbrush! You have given me lush images to ponder and enjoy! You are awesome at these poems, supremely beautiful! I perfectly love this glorious write! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:51:00 PM
    Yes, Nette, I can see from all the Heaven doorway poems I read here that we are all connected in our thoughts on the afterlife with the common thread of knowing we will see loved ones again. How nice you did an ottava rima!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 4:01:00 PM
    Knock,knock is there room and a bed for me.Here is the time to say good night now Nette my dear friend. - Beautiful written, wish you luck in contest. - Visit my last poem and read all about me.Take care....see you. - oxox love Anne-Lise