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Sonnet 45

Prime powder of your presence pleases me,
Blessings of beauty bare and not betrayed.
See it is she that Sue inside I see,
The only way to kiss my death and maid.

Failing to breathe, or the guilt to believe,
That Sue is not the answer to my pain...
I drink 'till wells are dry as I deceive,
The sun as if it will not dry the rain.

Life is the love that fills my filthy lawn,
Like light that bites the lunar dust of moon.
'Twas I inside that lied and now the dawn,
Communes my cause of ill I shall kill soon.

Please promise me to not punish my pride,
If Sue inside leads to my suicide.

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  1. Date: 5/29/2012 10:48:00 AM

    Johnny, wow... the image has the mild killing out look,, but, why the suicide image,, is that how strong the connection is..... thank you for sharing your awesome poem this morning, always :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:27:00 AM

    Johnny - some very heartfelt lines here.....i like that u r here at Poetry Soup.....so stay ok!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 4:03:00 AM

    Johnny let's hope she doesn't, I like it..David