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In a Dream

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Below is the poem entitled In a Dream which was written by poet Carmen Castro. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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In a Dream

I stare up at a sky and I see two moons 
In my amazement I freeze and don't know what to do 
I look down below and I see earth 
People turned into energies of light shoot by me in a burst 
I don't know where I'm going but I don't seem to  scared  
Looks like where I'm headed these shooting stars will be there 
In a dream we were turned into beams of light 
My eyes will never forget that amazing sight 
I wake up in the flesh to bad it was a  dream 
I'm still preplexed on how real it all seemed 
I often wish I would have stayed asleep 
To find out were those lights would have led me

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  1. Date: 5/28/2012 10:52:00 PM
    Nice keep up the good work.

    Castro Avatar Carmen Castro
    Date: 5/29/2012 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks the dream was so vivid I had to put it in to words.... : )