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Rented duvet

We did not wait
for the full undress

No,
not a stitch on us, while,
deep love made
giggles and…

the rough
fabric
burns



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  1. Date: 6/12/2012 6:04:00 PM

    Oh it is vandalism the way that sheet was rent.." James you must control the beast within!! L O L; enjoyed the read

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 6:28:00 PM

    In the heat of the moment...yes sir!good poem.

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 2:43:00 PM

    Yes! Like the scene in the movie where they are ripping each other's clothes off, so frantically horny are the two of them. You give a more refined twist to the affair, Sir James. Fortunately the batteries in my pace maker are fairly new. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 8:28:00 AM

    :)you gave me a smile.. Too bad for clothing companies..lol :)Very entertaining post James

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 5:48:00 AM

    hehe, James it will only be you.. I enjoyed this one ;) you should see my face while reading it.. Hope yourself and Noah are doing good.. love Wilma

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 6:46:00 PM

    Sigh:) undressing takes so long; why bother to dress at all? Love the giggles James, you make it all so much fun!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:22:00 PM

    this is REALLY nice one, James. Love that last part!!!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 8:47:00 PM

    Absolute perfection of the unsaid, JP! one of your best! To mine faves! Jimbo