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  1. Date: 6/8/2012 5:15:00 AM

    That was a familiar clatter. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:01:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Joann. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 5:55:00 AM

    oh Joann... you got it down with these driving forces of anxiety sounds... got me all stirred up just thinking about it. I'm going out to get some paper plates! Congratulations to you. so many great poems in this exciting contest. Love it.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:36:00 PM

    HI JOANN , Congratulations with your DEEP "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 2:47:00 PM

    That is the sounds that come from my kitchen everyday...Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:39:00 PM

    Very nice Joann!Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:31:00 PM

    Yes....unfortunately, this is a very common sound around our house....and never ends!!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:33:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Joann! I love the expression of emotion! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:40:00 AM

    wonderful tonality and well scribed piece, joann.. congrats on your win in my contest.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:53:00 AM

    Nice and interesting piece,Joann....Congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:27:00 AM

    Don't think I read this one before- but I understand it 100 %- and adore it!Congrats on your placing

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:21:00 AM

    Joann congrats on your win, super..David

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 6:22:00 PM

    Hi Joann - Like the symbolism of the dishes and pots and pans making noise to illustrate the feelings. Well-thought out. In answer to your question, yes, that's the same Grendel. Thanks for reading. - Gail

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:28:00 AM

    hi joann, i chanced upon this.. kindly include name, contest title and date of poem if this is part of my contest.. just part of the rules, my dear... thanks and hugggs!:)

    Grisetti Avatar Joann Grisetti Date: 5/30/2012 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, I forget that a lot.
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 10:28:00 AM

    Clever writer, describing the clatter causing so much tension. Excellent write, we all need moments of solitude.

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 7:59:00 AM

    Joann, clitter clatter,, the sound does not bother me... he he.. love it... thank you for sharing your awesome poem this morning, always :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 6:56:00 PM

    Joann, Terrific! This is the annoying sounds of tension. You captured the feelings in sound so well. I'm starting to unravel from reading it! LOL...best wishes in the contest. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 4:40:00 PM

    Nice rictameter here Joann. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 4:31:00 PM

    WEll, this is making me want to really get started on MY rictameter right away!! VERY good one, my dear!!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 4:22:00 PM

    i think that "clatter" is a brilliant choice for your title, beginning and ending. it sums it all up so well. nice one!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 4:06:00 PM

    This is an excellent write Joann! Incredible poem that I have read tonight! I just love the insane subject matter, it's awesome! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 4:06:00 PM

    well done