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Heart Beats

Heart Beats heart beats in rhythm’s flow electrical current moves like the sounds of drums pounding motions that allow our bodies to love heartstrings all connected in bass dancing while intertwined in song’s meter heart beats Contest: Sound of Motion Sponsor: Nette Onclaud By: Gail Doyle Date: 05/28/2012

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  1. Date: 6/8/2012 5:29:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:10:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Gail. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 3:39:00 PM

    Congrats on this electrial win..Enjoyed reading..Sara

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 6/4/2012 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sarah, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Nette's contest. Hugs, Gail PS I hope you are feeling much better these days. Just thinking about you that's all.
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:40:00 PM

    GAIL , Congratulations with THE BEAUTIFUL "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 6/4/2012 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PD, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Nette's contest and a BIG THANK YOU TO YOU on having my poem morning kisses win third place in your contest. Love always, Gail
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Congrats Gail on your win with this beautifully written Rictameter.Enjoyed.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 6/4/2012 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kash, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Nette's contest. Hugs always, Gail
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 10:02:00 AM

    if this is your first try at rictameter, you sound really good, gail.. congrats on your win in my spree!..:) hugggs!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 6/3/2012 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nette, thank you very much for enjoying my Heart Beats poem and placing it as part of your winning circle in your contest luv. It was exciting to do a different form. Love, Gail
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:31:00 AM

    Gail congrats on your win..David

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 6/3/2012 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    David, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Nette's contest. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 5/28/2012 8:49:00 PM

    Another excellent entry for this contest- wow.

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 6:21:00 PM

    I love the feelings you created within the sounds! Well done!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 3:24:00 PM

    Well done rictameter. Sure to do well in the contest.

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 1:24:00 PM

    I am glad to see an example here. I really have to try this one. I think you did marvelous with it, Gail.

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 1:19:00 PM

    So lovely Gail! Best Wishes for the contest! :) love u ya, deb

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 8:54:00 AM

    nicely done