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After Life

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After Life

Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust,

While you were alive,
Who did you trust,

Did you trust the One,
That did so much,

Or were you blinded,
By vanity,the evil touch,

The choice was yours,
Who did you choose,

God,you have won,
The devil ,you loose......

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  1. Date: 4/21/2014 5:59:00 AM
    Nice poem Rchard, stay on guard as the snake is always on the move. God Bless. D.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 4/22/2014 6:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    step on his head,,,thanks much Dave
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 10:12:00 PM
    Simple but powerful call to "Life" authentic. Well done Richard. Thank you for your poetic witness. May God go with you. Henry Victor

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 4/22/2014 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    may HE go with you too Henry,,,be bless and thanks
  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:39:00 PM
    Richard; I love this little poem. It gives out a good message. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/29/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for reading,positive messages in poetry,love it lol
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 10:19:00 PM
    Wow very powerful words love it!!!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 8/13/2012 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks much Cheryl
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 8:38:00 AM
    Richard, Keep waving your flag (I Cry, I Cry, I Cry) and continue to profess your faith with charmers like this.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Ray,I will
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:01:00 PM
    ..And thank you for stopping by my page today and having A read. "No sorry it wasn't about you it was meant for someone special and dear to my heart. Maybe next time" love always

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok,lol
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:53:00 PM
    "So curagiouly put in so little words.. I needed that! Carma"

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Carma
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 8:24:00 PM
    Very nice Richard,very simple and to the point!....Also thanks for stopping by my page. Greatly appreciated..

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok Dan will always be checking out your page.
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 2:43:00 PM
    Wow, that was amazingly good. Like, wow. I'm at a total loss for words and that's an accomplishment on your part.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/1/2012 6:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Reecie
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:21:00 PM
    Oh Yesssss! I love this Richard. God Bless. Dave.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/31/2012 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    God bless you toooo
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:18:00 AM
    I like the twist of this one to match the twist of an old rhyme ....Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Hope that your day is treating you well..Thanks for your presence at my work..I enjoyed the comments..Sara

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/31/2012 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Sara,have a great day
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 8:20:00 AM
    Brilliant write here Richard!!! Love it!!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/31/2012 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks,Super Ink
  1. Date: 5/30/2012 10:35:00 AM
    interesting aspect here Richard. we all hold the power of good over evil. like this, so much here to ponder on. harry

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/30/2012 7:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ponder Harry,ponder,lol,thanks Harry
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 3:42:00 PM
    nicely done Richard..blessings...Joseph

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/30/2012 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    in Jamaica we say"bless up yuhself",thanks Joseph
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 2:26:00 PM
    I love the conversation you have, Nicely done! Excellent poetry poet.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/31/2012 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Sean
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 12:17:00 PM
    i dont need to be told that you do music !

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/30/2012 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I write a little of everything,short stories,music,but poetry is my passion
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 11:29:00 AM
    Ohh, I love it, Richard. Yes, let's all cheer for God - GO GOD!!! Toquyen

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/30/2012 7:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    amen sister
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 8:25:00 AM
    After life, it is written, lovely expressd poem, nice rhyme, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you, Erich

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/29/2012 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    God bless you too,Erich,thanks
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:57:00 AM
    Wonderful write and great theme that you've chosen here. enjoyed the read.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/29/2012 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Yesha,your poem was great
  1. Date: 5/28/2012 10:29:00 PM
    Richard, i love the flow in your poem.... strong message... I love the after life... no losers allowed.... .. thank you for sharing your awesome poem.. have yourself a good night, always :-) LINDA

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/29/2012 5:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Linda the Destroyer,lol,thanks,happy I pleased
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