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Night

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Below is the poem entitled Night which was written by poet Patrick Cornwall. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The lamp post is lit


Bugs flutter towards the light


The cat waits to pounce


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Night

                                        

                                         The lamp post is lit


                                    Bugs flutter towards the light


                                      The cat waits to pounce






First try at Haiku

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  1. Date: 8/1/2012 3:23:00 PM
    Patrick.....I am enchanted by your HAIKU POEM..... it has given me the encouragement to write some myself. Thank you. Louis Drago

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:59:00 AM
    Hi Patrick great first attempt keep at it, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:23:00 AM
    Excellent job. Are you sure you haven't written a haiku before? This one's finely tuned. Kathy

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    Date: 6/3/2012 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL Kathy.. I read how to do it and just tried...
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:19:00 PM
    Not a bad first haiku. Keep writing them.