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Peace and Tranquility

Sitting amongst the heat of the sun,
listening to the various harmonious sounds,
the bird's cheeping and chirping,
the wasp's buzzing,
takes me to a tranquil place,
the flight of the fanciful bird,
tiny little creature's,
beetles's, ladybird's, ant's,
inhibit one's land,
if only we were all by the sand,
that would make my dream land.

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  1. Date: 5/27/2012 10:27:00 AM

    Amanda, just reading this puts me at tranquility with the thought of these creatures and the music they make through the quietness, lovely write, :) always, p.d.

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan Date: 5/28/2012 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanku so much for your lovely comment, I wrote it whilst sitting in my garden listening to the birds sing and being at one with nature. Thanku for your kind words Amanda <3