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Better the devil you know

It is so unfair - you’d think I would’ve learnt by now, seen the signs.
They always look so incredibly good, luring me in and before I know it, 
the feelings take over, I fall for the moment...............................

I eat the chocolate bar without a second thought, calories are so evil.

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  1. Date: 6/9/2012 7:34:00 AM

    Love white /brown chocolate covered pretzels. Enjoyed reading your poems this morning>>>>>Patrick

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 5:41:00 PM

    they say its better than the sex, but me id sooner take a bex(ancient headache powder) but chocolate has its time:)

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 7:12:00 AM

    hahah i can relate to how this happens, just got done with a stint doing personal training for 2 years- its these moments of temptation that are so hard to rationalize lol

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/30/2012 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh i hear you....eating the 'bad' food definitely can't be justified when you have a personal trainer lol.....also when one discovers how difficult it is to work those damn calories off ....yep difficult to Justify for sure :)
  1. Date: 5/28/2012 7:48:00 AM

    So right - that chocolate lures me in without even thinking about it.

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 10:11:00 PM

    hmmmm,took a bite,nice

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 6:24:00 PM

    For me it's not so much chocolate now as salty foods. Boy, keep that potato chip bad FAR away from me. Good poem.

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 5:17:00 PM

    i'm going through a breakup and this title makes me think!!!

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 1:25:00 PM

    ahh yes, temtation, enjoyed your write,..p.d.:)

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 7:16:00 AM

    Oh - how I laughed at this until I remembered the agony I'm going through this year - and you can discover what it is if you watch out for my latest poem - definitely inspired by you, Shaz. It will always be YOUR poem, when I think of it.

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 2:54:00 AM

    "I fall for the moment" - I really like what that line says- good job on this!