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The Trail of a Raindrop

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The Trail of a Raindrop


Sudden rain brought me under your umbrella for the first time. For the first time you were so close to me with your fragrance. The umbrella was not big enough to cover both of us. A raindrop was trickling down your forehead. I was following it's trail without listening to you. Your words couldn't touch me like the raindrops falling outside. The trail of that raindrop uncovers some secrets for me, your eyes were bluer than I thought and your dimples deeper. I discovered a beauty spot below your left ear lobe. Today,I know about all your beauty spots.... But still now in a rainy day I want to walk with you under the same umbrella.

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  1. Date: 1/22/2014 7:41:00 AM

    This piece has been written very well. The flow and rhythm are both good, and it was a poem that I enjoyed very much. Really nice job on this one.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:23:00 PM

    I am sorry I have been out of the loop for so long, I hope I can back into sync soon but many congratulations on your win Kash

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Kash, CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Well done. Really enjoyed the flow and lovely images. Sweet romance under that umbrealla. Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:00:00 AM

    Congrats on the win in the contest, kash

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 9:58:00 PM

    awesome win Kash... pd

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 2:57:00 PM

    This is spectacular Kash xxx

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:29:00 PM

    Kash, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:02:00 AM

    Walking in the rain under the same umbrella, extremely a beautiful poem. Congrats. Love Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 11:47:00 PM

    I love reading romantic poetry written by a poet who knows how to express ardor in such a genuine way. This is wonderful Kash! Congrats on you win with this beauty! I am faving this too.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 5:03:00 PM

    What a sweet, sensitive poem. I love it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 4:19:00 PM

    Very sweet, Kash! Congrats :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 3:09:00 PM

    A charming man! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 1:31:00 PM

    Beautiful. J

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:22:00 PM

    Awwww, sweet. A well-deserved win, for sure. Nice one, Gentle Kash. :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 11:32:00 AM

    This is really great. I love it and i have enjoyed reading it. Big warm congratulations on your grand win my dear friend Kash. Thanks also for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:32:00 AM

    many congratulations on your double win Kash , first as a fave and now this xx

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:01:00 AM

    this is lovely! congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 2:11:00 AM

    Congrats, Kash, this is good!! Jag

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:35:00 AM

    Kash this is lovely. congrats....Seren

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:17:00 AM

    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:27:00 AM

    BIG congrats to the king of romantic poetry. How are things going for you, kashinath? I think you must be very busy this month!

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 4:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Kash xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:38:00 PM

    Adorable. Many congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Kash, congratulations in the Skat, contest. Take Care PD

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:26:00 PM

    Congratulations ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:44:00 AM

    testing one two three hahaha

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:07:00 PM

    KASH, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 5:02:00 AM

    Kash a belated congrats on your win..David

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