Three Moonlit Ponds on a Theme by Deborah Burch

Three Moonlit Ponds on a Theme

Moonlit Ponds the moon's reflection stirs in the pond as ripples gather around us so close we're breathing as one ' till our eyes meet I can't breathe looking at the moon holding each other tightly the whispering wind breathes our secret to the trees and laughs ripples on the pond my fever rages as a hot caldron burning you have bewitched me my spellbound heart skips like stones jumping on the moonlit pond deborah burch© 5/26/2012 to cyndi because inquiering minds wanted to know...now duck ...quick! LOL

harry horsman

Date: 6/2/2012 4:42:00 AM

love these Deborah, last line, second tanka is a masterpiece, as are all of them. harry p.s your avatar is beautiful.

Deborah Burch Date: 6/2/2012 12:26:00 PM

lol thank you 'arry ;-) and also for the gracious compliment! *blush* love ya,deb

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/30/2012 6:39:00 AM

hello Deb, I love this, such a fun element to it as well, I especially dig the last Tanka :) love Wilma

Deborah Burch Date: 6/2/2012 12:23:00 PM

thank you dear Wilma!! love ya bunches!!!:-)

CYNDI MACMILLAN

Date: 5/29/2012 12:27:00 AM

:-) Hey, Hi! And WOOOOOOOOOOW!!! After an exhausting day of outdoor splash play (6 hours), I was pooped. My girl had only a 1/2 hour nap but was on the go yesterday (today?) from 6:30 am until 9:30 pm! EGADS! I crawled into bed just after 10, woke from a neck cramp and decided to spend 15 mins reading po's and found this (It's 2:30 am) LOOOOVE these. Especially floored by the second... Way to write! Hugs, Cyndi, now crawling back into bed and will cry Mercy tomorrow if the day repeats LOL.

Deborah Burch Date: 5/29/2012 12:41:00 AM

LOL...Thank you:-) for the challenge...nite nite, love ya, deb.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/26/2012 7:56:00 PM

Wonderful Deb! I must go back and find the starting point for this. Time to check out your Summer Butterflies! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Deborah Burch Date: 5/29/2012 12:42:00 AM

lol, thank you Rhonda, love ya, deb

Adriana Michaels

Date: 5/26/2012 6:51:00 PM

Deborah, my heart skips at your imagery. Thank you.

Deborah Burch Date: 5/29/2012 12:44:00 AM

thank you gor your kindness, Adriana, I am deeply touched, huggs, deb

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/26/2012 9:30:00 AM

I really loved these Tankas! Your writes were truly magnificent and grandiose! My favorite tanka has to be the third one, such an intense feel to it! Great Work!!

Deborah Burch Date: 5/29/2012 12:46:00 AM

:-) thank you dear Russell, love ya, deb

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/26/2012 7:33:00 AM

good love stuff especially the wrap up lines!! Light & Love

Deborah Burch Date: 5/29/2012 12:47:00 AM

*curtsey* thank you!! :-) love ya, deb

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 5/26/2012 7:15:00 AM

Hi Deborah....lovely poem. Really enjoyed the read......Shaz

Deborah Burch Date: 5/29/2012 12:48:00 AM

thanks Shaz :-)

Joseph May

Date: 5/26/2012 5:51:00 AM

this is beautiful..

Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 6:07:00 AM

thank you dear Joseph! :)

Arild Andresen Ertsland

Date: 5/26/2012 5:23:00 AM

Great write,Deborah:-)lol,should I duck now?! haha..have a lovely weekend! Hugs,Arild

Deborah Burch Date: 5/26/2012 5:38:00 AM

LoL! thank you Arild! no, that was back at cyndi, you have to read her challenge to under my "SummerButterflies" poem....hugs, love ya...deb

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