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Shaz Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Suddenly which was written by poet Shaz Cheesman. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Suddenly

Conjured an ocean of emotions
Within me lured, twisted and tangled
Swiftly and quickly my heart pounding
At a thought, a vision, a moment
All my senses invited and aroused
To play in a circle for answers

I lay washed up on the shoreline
A journey with the waves to ponder
Every part of my being, wrestling 
 the forgotten and the unknown
Alive, awaken, eyes wide open
My mind, body and soul to take
I sacrifice to dance in the circle
Questions and answers I seek

Emotions and moments that spark
Imprinting on my mind to last
Come forth to replace that which is gone
To blast the past and pave for the new
Its all experience, that makes me
I seek who I am and what I want
The hardest journey to go on
Answers hardest to seek.

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  1. Date: 6/3/2012 3:41:00 PM
    I can't help but think of Billy Ocean. You have a wonderful way of dancing with your words.

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 5:40:00 PM
    You put so much feeling,and thought into this! X-celent! :o) And thank you for gazing into my mind,and thoughts..I hope it was enjoyable? :o)

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 10:05:00 PM
    WOW,THIS IS TRULY A STUPENDOUS POEM DEAR POET!!!

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 5/26/2012 10:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Bowe....... Thank you :)
  1. Date: 5/26/2012 4:19:00 PM
    Know myself again in some of these lines, well written Shaz. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 5/26/2012 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Anne - Lise so lovely to get your comments. Thank you so much. Sunday now, but I have had nice weekend - Shaz :) mwah
  1. Date: 5/26/2012 8:52:00 AM
    How awsome is this! so many fav lines in it I can't quote them all! :) "all my senses invited and aroused to play in a circle for answers"... cool personafication! Well Done write Shaz!!! write on, my friend :) big hug, love ya, deb

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 5/26/2012 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Deb....wow I'm so glad u enjoyed my poem. thank you for your flattering comments! - Shaz hugs right back at u..
  1. Date: 5/26/2012 2:19:00 AM
    Feels like the thoughts running through the mind of a sprinter just before he crosses the starting line. Love, justin

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 5/26/2012 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I never thought of it that way......but i love the different perspectives people have when they read other poems. Awesome thanks Justin - Shaz xo